If I gave you a taste

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If I gave you a taste

You would want more. So I sustain
from deviating, taking the unknown path.
I live in my shelter, of tease a bit
please, never. I want so much to
take it all. The bull, the race, the red tape
cut, but I stand
alone showing a lil glimpse of my true self
here and there. Hoping you
You
You
will replace the pieces, fix my puzzle
and apply even strokes of honey
to glue me back together
again.

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TeeTeeTeeTeealmost 17 years ago
Splendid

Another great one RF, I do so enjoy reading your work. Thanks for sharing :)

T_T

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Beautiful

and quite touching

I loved the feeling underneath its words and the last stanza grabbed me with its wonderfully done symbolism

'You

will replace the pieces, fix my puzzle

and apply even strokes of honey

to glue me back together

again.'

Excellent stuff

Many FeathersMany Feathersalmost 17 years ago
Of course

You know I love your writing. We think (and feel) so much alike.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionalmost 17 years ago
beautiful

so much feeling in this one~great poem RF

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