If You Could See Yourself

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If You Could See Yourself

If you could see yourself
Lying uninhibitedly naked on the rug by the hearth
Damp curls pasted to your forehead
Eyes drooping with sated luxury
Breathing deeply and evenly as you drowse

Flames licking at your envious shadow
Bronzed shoulders illumined by the glow
Light flickering over the pulse at your throat
Leaning over you, I drink in your scent
Nostrils flaring as desire rises sharply

Letting my tongue travel the plains of your face
Watching as you stir and lightly moan
Reminiscent in your slumber, your tongue appears
Lapping gently at your lips as they part
Nibbling, I lick and taste your pleasure still

Slipping inside and mating my tongue with yours
Curling it within and seeking silky warmth
Fusing our lips together as the dance begins
Sucking lightly as I hear you moan
I feel your return to erotic awareness

If you could know what my hands feel
As they stroke your warming skin to shivers again
Stirring in your sleep, you smile
Laying beside you as I fit my body to yours
Your sighing embrace is a silent plea

Holding you in arms tense with desire
Gliding my hand firmly down your back
Nubile fingers tracing ridges, pressing into curvatures
Your arching response pressing hips into mine
Sighing deeply, you awaken at last

Tightly, your arms now surround me
Large hands moving lower on my spine
Passion strengthens your kiss, fueling desire
Silken folds meet with questing velvet strength
Poised for flight, our bodies join fluidly

If you could only know the depth of my desire
As the length of you glides into my moist, willing sheath
Hands and fingers stoking the flames on my breasts
Lips tugging and creating a molten response
Rising and falling together in the fire's light

Only you know the strength of your caresses
How you fill and fulfill me with deep and sure thrusts
You rise up above me to increase our sensations
Sinking in deeply and plumbing my depths
Watching your glistening shaft reappear from within

If you could see how the passion overtakes you
When slick and hot thrusts bring you close to the peak
When my grasping hot wetness caresses you strongly
And gasping, perspiring, straining and moaning,
The pinnacle of pleasure is within our reach

If you could see yourself
As I see you, my love
Your heart would soar
Your lips would smile
You would be me, fulfilled and replete.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Lovely piece

Well done, dear, write another!

Artist101Artist101about 20 years ago
wonderful stuff

a wonderful poem for a cold snowy night

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
This is a tour de force

....making me feel slightly voyeuristic. It's erotic without being crass and one senses the true nature of the writers feelings for her subject.

Well done.

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