Illumination

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I'll help you step
toward the light
in bright flashing neon,
"Girls, Girls, Girls."
Yes.
I was born
to please.
Please,
take my hand.
Let me show you
where I've been
and what I've learned.
Take a lick
of my experience.
Just lay back now,
it will all come
crystal clear.

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dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
under the surface....

this packs a punch, but straight up it sells itself with Girls, Girls, Girls. nicely done......don

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Indeed there is

Nothing as sweet as

A professional woman...

lobomaolobomaoover 18 years ago
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oh how fun

an audience of one

curiousity peaked

and passion burn

wherever was it

she found that to learn?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent

I find it very strong. The line breaking is used very well, and the metaphor is maintained throughout. An excellent poem, CW!

Fly

sacksackover 18 years ago
yes, this dances...

and the rhythm is strong...Thanks for sharing!

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