Illusion

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Syana
Syana
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Loving caresses on a
heartless body
Sweet kisses on
numb lips
Loving whispers fall upon
deaf ears
Care-filled eyes gaze upon an
ice-cold face

Numb lips whisper
words I want to hear
Frozen hands
warm on my body
Eyes so cold
look at me with care
Numb lips
lay gentle kisses on me

The frozen heart
seems to be melting
Acting so well
I'm almost convinced
I wish it were more than
just an illusion.

Syana
Syana
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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
This one is very nice...

the best of yours I have read so far. A nice easy flow enhances the effect.

jim :)

sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
Nice one

Maybe its about your lover or just relationships in

general. Either way it's a good one.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
welcome

Welcome to poetry Syana, I see you have been busy with your stories! Good going! You have an easy feel to your poem-- soothing and thoughtful. Keep writing, we will keep reading!

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