- Illustrated Poetry
- I'm Your Venus
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Click hereAn average look and average body
Don’t know why you want me badly
I guess you’re not choosy
You said I’m rather chubby
I thought that was said quite cruelly
Considering that you yourself are not that sexy
But when we made love in the fashion of bunny
You told me I’m perfect while molding my booby
It made me giggly like crazy
That you adore an average Venus like me
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 11 years agoif only Perfect exists. CRUEL yes. A fem friend heard that a new aquaint suggested her breasts were small. Like his Prick, and head, her Immediate refrain.
A fine coming together Ode post.
tazz317about 12 years agoor a very good close friend,, TK U MLJ LV NV
KOLKOREover 17 years agoI thought the poem was good, but I think you missed an opportunity with the visual. This torso IS quite sexy. It did not come across as an ironic contrast. With it you are saying: OK, Venus is very sexy (see example). But other women can be too (totally agree). Did we really need the demonstration of Venus?
IMO, had you put a photo of a dressed, plain looking woman it would have worked on our imagination much better: before reading the poem and after. Thanks for your poem.
Amyfriendover 17 years agowilling partners... is still love.
You don't have to be Brad and Angelina to experience the same 'love'.
The ratings are in the hearts of the participants and no others.
Anonymousover 17 years ago....combination - the picture and poem compliment one another making the whole better.
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