- Erotic Poetry
- Immortal Dreams
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Click hereA spray of semen
across my dark sheets,
glimmers in the half light.
And calls to mind
a hint of immortality
slowly fading with the night.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 18 years agoShort, bare
Could be tighter;
If only one thing changed
I'd drop "my" from the second line.
My Erotic Trailover 18 years agoreminds me of an article that touched this topic, if we count how many times a man ejaculates and divide that by how many children they have, it is easier to win the lottery than to predict which sperm will fertilize the seed, nice write.
Anonymousover 18 years agoI like this. It's different. The only thing I wasn't fond of was the word spray.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing! :)
