Imperfect Circle

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Crawl from the soup, eager ones.
Breathe deep the sweet air.
Different yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

Run and hide, little ones.
Down the dark holes.
Safety yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

Look to the skies, furry ones.
Watch the flash strike the tree.
Warm yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

Destroy all others, hairless ones.
Stab with sticks. Reign supreme.
Powerful yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

Observe the sun, brilliant ones.
Simplest element. Harness it.
Unlimited yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

Back to the water, unworthy ones.
Sink deep. Forget.
Soothing yes?
Teach others.
Good boy.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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An interesting way to look at evolutionary changes.

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 17 years ago
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i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum - wildsweetone (ps the 50% temp rating is so that it will not affect future temp ratings)

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