Impersonal Greeting

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Hi, how are you?
How are you today?
I’m sorry you are sad.
Have a nice day.

Hi, how are you?
How are you today?
I’m sorry you feel bad.
Have a nice day.

Hi, how are you?
How are you today?
I’m sorry you are mad.
Have a nice day.

Hi, how are you?
How are you today?
I’m so glad you are glad.
Have a nice day.

Hi, how are you?
How are you today?
Dad? I Didn’t recognize you.
Have a nice day.

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2 Comments
virgin2267virgin2267over 15 years ago
Hi Freddie

and how are you today. Interesting poem you have here. You have a nice day. Your faithful fan, vick

Safe_BetSafe_Betover 15 years ago
Hmmmmm.

Sorry, not crazy about this piece. To quote Senna Jawa (quite possibly the best poet ever to have posted in Lit) "Don't force a poem around a single good phrase." I think that is what you have done here. There is no "meat" to this piece until you get to the last stanza. Granted the rest of the piece is to set us up for the "finale", but you need to do that with more substantive content.

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