tagErotic PoetryIn me (Subspace #2)

In me (Subspace #2)


What is in me is unchangeable
The sun along its elliptic
The seeping of night
If I willed it with every atom I could
Not change a thing about
What forever is.
It coils around the base of
Snakes out electric tendrils and joins me.
Not just to you
But to
Salt and sweet.

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