- Non-Erotic Poetry
- in my flying dream last night
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i climbed far out on a limb
stood and stretched my arms apart
tested the breeze bent my knees
gave myself a gentle push and
i was sailing through the air
in my flying dream last night
up in the sky and unencumbered
by fears and rational thought
i caught an updraft and soared
swiftly beyond the horizon where
i found you there waiting for me
in my flying dream last night
and when you sprouted wings
i knew you shared my vision
and as i felt the flaring flutter
of the beating heat of your heart
there was a dalliance in the air
in my flying dream last night.
- COMMENTS
tungtied2ualmost 20 years agothink you could tighten it up a bit. Extra words detract from the picture you paint- and it is a liberating picture!
Anonymousalmost 20 years ago...erotically charged. Maybe it is in the wrong category?
It cetainly has a lovely, airy feel to it.
Anonymousalmost 20 years agothe message in the write, steve. Those flying dreams are the ones you want, they reflect the happiness you feel while your awake, then to share with another is even better.
YDDalmost 20 years agoA good redition of a common dream,
but why only one dally?
You had a whole dream in which to play.
Maybe you don't need the "a" ??
Maria2394almost 20 years agoshould always be flying in your dreams, with the one you love so much!! beautiful poem Steve :)
