- Erotic Poetry
- In Nocte
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Stella,
my dearest,
is it so cruel of you
to graze those thighs
against my peach skin
and not follow through?
Stella,
is it so cruel of you
to let slip those sighs
as you caress your breasts
but ignore mine?
Stella,
is it so cruel of you
to stare into my eyes
as your hand wanders down
and you finally unwind?
"Stella,"
is it so wrong when
my soft moan escapes
as I think of you?
Stella meos in nocte.
- COMMENTS
Corpse_rideralmost 13 years agoAs with others who left comments I felt there was more to this than meets the eye.
But, I still liked it.
Llacheualmost 13 years agoI thought the simplicity of this very accomplished, with a teasing romantic eroticism. Not quite sure I am guessing right as to what the final line means, but that is probably just me showing ignorance.
greenmountaineeralmost 13 years agoI'm afraid your title and last line are just too esoteric. I spent a lot of time googling words that left me confused. Too bad because the rhythm and the way way you stretched the rhyme without it sounding like a nursery rhyme made an otherwise excellent poem less because of it IMO.
It occurred to me that Stella("A Streetcar Named Desire?") was like a "cat woman" moaning (meowing?) as she was exciting you in her self-pleasure in the night(in noctem?), but I may be completely off the mark, which means (a) I misunderstood what others would not, so disregard my comment or (b) you need to re-work the last line and title.
