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Click hereIn our dream we walk together
On a sun-kissed beach
White sands at our feet
A mountain drop of green
Seafood and pina colada
Licking waves and heaven-blue sky
Kissing our bodies
In the dream
In our dream we talk forever
Weaving stories of life
With laughter and vibe
Creating what we see
With Love and imagination
Rainbow words with golden seams
Written on the page
In the dream
In the dream we live forever
Never wanting to part
Together in heart
Shaping every moment
A sculptor and his knife
Mystical angels of love and life
Carved out of rock
In our dream
Forever
© Gaia_Lorraine 2005
Love your vision
of love lived together;
such a good start ~
but the true challenge ~
how many variations
can you build on this theme?
I like your imagery. Just it has been done before.
I do that a lot too. It is hard to get around,
when it is Reallllly what you want to say, eh ~
I love the flow, and the write itself, is very sweet.
Please give us More !!!
*Smiles*
you laid this on the page. I thought it was a little
wordy and had a few too many cliches. Sometimes
I like a cliche for the visual. The visual
was clear and I enjoyed the read. sandspike