In Our Dream

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In Our Dream

In our dream we walk together
On a sun-kissed beach
White sands at our feet
A mountain drop of green
Seafood and pina colada
Licking waves and heaven-blue sky
Kissing our bodies
In the dream

In our dream we talk forever
Weaving stories of life
With laughter and vibe
Creating what we see
With Love and imagination
Rainbow words with golden seams
Written on the page
In the dream

In the dream we live forever
Never wanting to part
Together in heart
Shaping every moment
A sculptor and his knife
Mystical angels of love and life
Carved out of rock
In our dream
Forever

© Gaia_Lorraine 2005

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CuriouswifeCuriouswifeover 18 years ago
It just takes you away to a prettty place

Beautiful imagry.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

Love your vision

of love lived together;

such a good start ~

but the true challenge ~

how many variations

can you build on this theme?

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Nice

I like your imagery. Just it has been done before.

I do that a lot too. It is hard to get around,

when it is Reallllly what you want to say, eh ~

I love the flow, and the write itself, is very sweet.

Please give us More !!!

*Smiles*

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I like the way......

you laid this on the page. I thought it was a little

wordy and had a few too many cliches. Sometimes

I like a cliche for the visual. The visual

was clear and I enjoyed the read. sandspike

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