- Non-Erotic Poetry
- In Too Deep
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Click hereHere I read submitted lines
From poets with thoughts of pure gold
That humble the rustic stanzas of mine
With insights and stories well told
But I want to know better these wonderful bards
To understand reasons and purpose
So I try to think under those phrases and words
So deeply I lose sight of the surface
Sigh.
- COMMENTS
Queenelizabethover 10 years agoExactly what a poet should do. And a lovely poet you are. Rustic: simple and honest, something I enjoy in your poetry. There is a depth achieved in that.
Oldbear63over 10 years agoAuthorI need to become more patient - read each one more before submitting. As I re-read I keep seeing things I might say differently. And I need to open my mind more. I have been having great fun on the site reading and writing and learning. Thanks agian.
todski28over 10 years agoclear writing can often be better than double meanings and stretched metaphors, stoic, resolute, strong are words I would use to describe your writing, you are better than you may think. the more reading you do and identifying what works and why in your own head the clearer it gets.
Ashesh9over 10 years agoYou add to tge Diversity & Versatility of this place , please do not dare to be humble about your poetic output . I feel proud of you as a friend , a fellow Poet & a good Human Being ! 5-ed .
Maria2394over 10 years agois really good! and as for understanding, just keep reading. The poets in the forum are awesome and there are some excellent teachers there as well. Keep writing, never give up. The more you write the better you write, so keep up the good work :)
~ maria
