Incoherent Ramblings of a Student

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Oklahoma-smoke enshrouded,
dancing, a mango-tree waltz
is left on my palette...
Obscure sentence-realities
form dreams upon an angel's fingertips.
Sulfur-daisy odour wafts through
stagnant daydreams,
corrupted by perfection and the
drone of a foreign professor.
An unknown lover traces
fairy paths over
an ivory back, sensations race
from toes to tongue;
heart palpitations signal an excitement
unknown to this innocent child
of nature.
Oklahoma-smoke enshrouded,
buildings fall, souls raise up,
and I curl into the clouds,
with Zeus, my lover;
fall into Ambrosia sleep;
Cherub voices hail Hades for
JUST A DREAM-TRIP!
nothing more.

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jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
An interesting ramble...

with some wonderful phrasing... I loved:

"Sulfur-daisy odour wafts through

stagnant daydreams,

corrupted by perfection and the

drone of a foreign professor."

excellent stuff.

jim : )

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Impressive.

An excellent read. Thank you.

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