Non-Erotic PoetryIndecisionI have or I want?
Nurture and relish or dismiss and reject?
Dare yourself to love or turn and run away?
Endure the pain that comes with pleasure
Commission chance, trust fate and believe
Initiate release. Let your heart surrender
Succumb to your deepest yearnings
Indulge your sinful longings
Only the weak refuse to gamble
No doubts, be strong
If only I could choose
If only it were that easy
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If it was easy
Would it be worth it? Like the simplicity of style and the confused, indecisive finale. I've made up my mind: 5stars.
Excellent last four lines
I really, really liked the last four lines. Magnificently capturing the feeling of indecision. They do this with a very plain and matter of fact style and word usage.
The first eight lines are much more ornate and wordy and (in my view) do not work anything like as well.more...
connected
I so connected with this....I fought love for a year before finally admitting defeat and just accepting it. The speaker's indecion and fears are evident...as evident t as my own feelings were.. a great way to convey that feat many of us feel to take a risk!more...
After Invitation 'n Indecision what will your next be , Saucy MH.....???
Intuition , Insuiniation , Intansgience ??? 5-ed .
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