Ink Held Out

Way too brief

But powerful in impact;

Leaving the reader to complete the write

In his own subjective ways.

You always have something to say.

And I always wind up wishing you'd say a little more when you write. I think you should extend your writing out a bit, and push and test yourself.

I am quite sure your writing is strong enough to keep its cohesion in pieces that are a bit longer, and would be more satisfying, at least to me.

I liked the image that you've created here