Interplanetary Solitude

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Far Off in the vast nigritude
that is space.
Unknown to all.
A entity points
it's long accusatory finger
at my self imposed confinement.
A planetary vacuum consuming
the empty atmosphere.
Oleaninous
and
vile
cosmic hands
reach to grasp
what is left of my
solitude.

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keacremekeacremeabout 17 years ago
thesaurus

sometimes the smaller words can be more expressive, but i did like "nigritude", though. liked the idea of the work.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Oh my...

Not that unknown 'entity'. It (he/she) is always breaking the peace and quiet of cosmic solitude. ET go home, git outta here. Nice poem (sorry I got carried away). Did you mean "Oleaninous" or "Oleaginous" (meaning oily)