Hot sweet lips
Which devour my own
As gentle hands
Stroke my aching breasts
I’m lost in sensation
A haze of pleasure
That sweeps over me
And carries me out
With the tide.
Arching my back
Passionate moans
A whimper of pleasure
All tell the tale
Of the ecstasy
That fills us
The intimacy
That we contain
As we ride the waves
And pass the finish line
Crying out our triumph
Together
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Perfect imagery
Carefully worded, a concise poem. I particularly like the passive helplessness of 'carries me out with the tide'. Beautiful
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