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Click hereShe calls to hear my voice
to help erase the ringing
of shrill pleas for mommy’s
attention, to find soothe
and stillness from the seemingly
never ending demands her young ones
place on her
In whispered tones I take her
to the sanctuary of two hearts together
wash the weariness dripping in her words
cleanse the burden clinging to her back
with assurances of her trials temporality
and that our time will come
a time
when we will roll
fall into billowing folds of down
surrounded by warm whispers
soft wisps of white
enraptured in a cloud
of consummation
musical movements
lyrical, languorous
muted moans
guttural groans
satisfied sighs
rise
from two
transformed
into one
sharing loads
dreams
love
each other
Dear Tung,
What I really enjoyed was the hurried, long lines to the change of one or two words, the transition from conveluded to simple, burdened to sensuous.
You listed this as non-erotic, but I would beg to differ. a very pretty piece, more complex than first glance would lead one to believe.
I'd change soothe to soothing--it sounds more soothing that way. :)
I tend to agree about "soothe". I only knew it as a verb. I would also say that this is an erotic poem. One of soft and soothing warmth.
and affectionate, the tone of this enjoyable poem. I have trouble trying to get the word "soothe" to fit; it's like a rough spot in an otherwise polished gem. Thanks!
My wife and I had our son off and
out of the house for about two months
running around naked and finally the
house to just the two of us and
my niece got detained "grin" we wound
up raiseing her two little ones
a 2 month old and 2 years old so it
started all over again <grin>
hince: My Erotic Tails "Blizzard"
nice poem Tung~
and wonderful memories
oh yea and erotic <grin>