- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Is there still time...
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Click hereMy life is tedious and such a bore
When all I'd like is a life to share
The Web is open and I explore
for whom I might... my soul bare
It's lonely and quiet as I sit
I ponder my life and still despair
Cause I'm not beautiful nor a wit
Then scratch my head and pull my hair
I spot a name and simple words... a note
Then study the photo and words so fair
I ponder hard and then... later I wrote
Are you lion, gazelle, rabbit or bear
The answer was soon and quite long
A life lonely... and apartment... not lair
Life started pleasant dreams went wrong
It sounded familiar and I gasped... for air
Writing began and hopes were lifted
Kindred soul and person to care
Two lives mingle and are shifted
Someone to kiss... someone to share
- COMMENTS
YDDalmost 20 years agoIn this work you make everything rhyme,
which is always at least a good exercise,,
but by concentrating on your A,B,A,B pattern as much as you have,
you have somewhat shorted your story telling and imagery.
Have you tried a version without rhymes,
just concentrating on images and smoothly flowing words?
Keep writing and sharing
