It Dies Easily

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misterwho
misterwho
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It dies so easily

It blossoms
The beauty fills you
The fragrance intoxicates


You feel you did not exist before it
You feel you cannot exist without it

It completes you so well
That you forget
How delicate it is

That at the first harshness
Of the bright sharp sun
Known as reality
Love dies
So easily.

misterwho
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tazz317tazz317over 8 years ago
"IT"....THE UNKNOWN COMMODITY

as strange as UP. TK U MLJ LV NV

misterwhomisterwhoover 8 years agoAuthor
The Context

Love is the "act"; but with deep emotional involvement - not just raw sex.

She meets with an intent to communicate love through the act. She does. It is beautiful. And then - she cannot sustain the relationship. Preferring what she MUST do, to what she WANTS to do; or what you want her to do. Thence the poetry ....

erectus123erectus123over 8 years ago
brilliant! - 5

but what in this context is "love" if not the act

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