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Click hereI sit and watch the night go on
Nothing seems to touch me
Nothing I want to touch me...
If I have no anticipation's
None can be broken
Promises can get broken...
Did I have a warm embrace
Sweep me to him
Kissing me to convey?
Nope I was sound a sleep
dreaming of him
with desires not ignited..
No white or gold boldness
Making me braver
I snuggled in my down comforter..
I don't need one night
I have many to tell him
How I feel...
lines in this poems. These stanzas are good:
"Nope I was sound a sleep
dreaming of him
with desires not ignited.."
Good line about desires not ignited.
No white or gold boldness
Making me braver
I snuggled in my down comforter.."
White or gold boldness--excellent. :)
once again your enchanting style
graces our mninds. wonderful poem
and so glad to see you back in the saddle
of writing, don't fret the small minded comments
just gaze at the destination of
your poetic dreams and write another...<grin>