- Erotic Poetry
- It's me
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When your heart pounds so hard you can’t catch your breath, it’s me
When you wake up reaching for a body, you’re sure you were holding in a dream, it’s me
When you feel your whole life you have been thirsty, and you are searching for the elusive quench, it’s me
When you wonder if there’s a soul that aches to be yours, it’s me
When you can’t understand why your body feels on fire without the touch of a hand, it’s me
When you want to know somebody wants you, its me
When you ponder who would cross oceans just to lie at your side, it's me
When you've wandered the Earth searching for your completion,
Face the facts; find a clue,
Because when I ask the question-
The answer always comes up the same-it's you
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoAt first I wondered about the "it's me" repetition. I understood the intent and that was cool, but then I'm thinking, "break it up somewhere" which you handled just fine, at the end.
I think this is song lyric potential.
