- Erotic Poetry
- It's Still Lingering on My Tongue
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It's Still Lingering on My Tongue
The taste of salty sweaty lust
Does linger on my wet red tongue.
It feels so ethereal-
So graceful at her first touch
When I run my fingers
Through her reddish hair
And her soft sleek curls give way
To caresses of her lobe.
It's then I do feel soft as she
And wonder at the femininity inside
It lasts so long.
Then my need evolves
To touch her lips
And rub mine
Against her glossy fine.
She brushes
And so do I.
And it's at that moment
My wonder dies.
And I want her-
To be inside her.
So I part her lips
And my tongue does dip
Beneath hers,
Around hers
Oh my!
And she touches my face
And my heart doth start race-
Wanting, expecting much more
And I pin her
With hands.
Rub her.
My glands
Are aching for something
Beyond
Her breasts curve and harden
And my loins do as well
So I take her
And I lick her
Sublime
She does lift and she does spread
And she tells me
She gets wet
When I lick her
And I taste her left arm
And I laugh
And I giggle
Cause that's this woman's fine riddle
It's no g-spot
But I found her little weakness
So we writhe
And we do sweat
And I do enter
No regrets
And we shake
And we rattle
And come...
- COMMENTS
erectus123over 8 years agosome imperfections but still pumps emotion from the reader. Whether Old English adds or subtracts is a question, I'd strike it and stay modern. (example-
"doth start race", "does lift and she does" ) but the lines
"And I laugh
And I giggle
Cause that's this woman's fine riddle
It's no g-spot
But I found her little weakness" are lovely lines, as is the title.
