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Click hereJEALOUSY: THE SLOW DECAY OF LOVE 690512
I would flash a dark fire at her that
any man touching
should burn,
his sex withered and
in her gold mouth a labyrinth
construct that
consorts probing would be lost, I
would caution tradesmen
to watch her private movements and
noting Philistines
report at once, I
would anoint my body with charcoal
to roll with her
in a bath of white
vellum
checking for fingerprints
-30- May 12, 1969 - Montreal
Montreal, May 5, 1969
I liked this one the best. On all three of your poem I found your line breaks oddly intriguing and was immediately reminded of some of W.C. William's poems. Here you left me dangling at the end of a line, wanting it to read on, but pausing before rolling down to the next line. Something about that here added to the poem, not really an intrigue but an anticipation that I enjoyed. Very good...
jim : )