- Non-Erotic Poetry
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Click hereyear after year
her body plays the same old hits
songs known so by heart
that no one dances anymore
we just drink and smoke
with only peeling wallpaper
for company
still, i like that
when i drop in four bits
and punch up D11
drop the needle in
her worn worn groove
we live out better times
however much they're harsh
or wicked scratched
and low fidelity
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoI thought, when you "drop the needle in/her worn worn groove" why the heck would that poem would not be considered as an erotic poem? It's so good it brings a smile to my face!
LeBrozover 16 years agoSome wicked good lines in this, as the wicked lady observes. This is the third so far this year from the 5/5 thread and the best yet, leaving much for the reader to work with in this suggestively worded piece.
WickedEveover 16 years agomentioned on the new poems review thread on the literotica poetry forum. Some great lines in this poem, especially: drop the needle in/her worn worn groove/or wicked scratched/and low fidelity
