Jules's Loins

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Jules’s Loins
By: Hobbes Goblynn

Jules laid all alone
Locked away within her room
Crying into the phone
Unaware- with an ever-so pleasant womb

Locked away within her room
Purple silk panties, white cotton socks
Unaware- with an ever-so pleasant womb
Awaiting my throbbing cock

Purple silk panties, white cotton socks
Ready to be torn apart
Awaiting my throbbing cock
Forcing through, piercing heart

Ready to be torn apart
To bust open the painted pink door
Forcing through, piercing heart
Would leave her saddened and sore

To bust open the painted pink door
Running in with a handful of rope
Would leave her saddened and sore
Attached to the post, to be groped

Running in with a handful of rope
Ruffled purple panties glow
Attached to the post, to be groped
Silk pulled down, slipped off her toe

Ruffled purple panties glow
Her sock in mouth muffles screams
Silk pulled down, slipped off her toe
A dirty pain is learned, shattered dreams

Her sock in mouth muffles screams
Crying into the phone
A dirty pain is learned, shattered dreams
Jules laid all alone

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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
well,

it did have a bdsm feel at first but the shattered dreams part was a bit of a downer and took away from the eroticism and gave it more of an unpleasant, disturbing, rape feel.

Still, it's well written.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
creepy form

creepy, yes I said it!! but I like creepy muwaaahaaa ;)

** but I will just be sure to never buy purple silk panties or white cotton socks, lol**

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