- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Junction
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Click hereDark still and tempting: bare feet are drawn
Pant legs rolled up high
SPLASH, soaking legs to the thigh
Squishy velvet between toes and giggles smothered
If no one catches you, a woman of thirty-eight
You can be a child again in mind and spirit
The next puddle waits
Still and smooth as the first
If you jump in the right one at the right time: eyes closed tight
Believing the impossible can happen
Maybe when you come out the other side you will be somewhere magic
Always felt, you never found the doorway to till now
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoWho hasn't dreamt of those magic moments? As for the listy feel mentioned in the previous comment; massage this a bit and break it into three strophes and the listy feel will disappear.
champagne1982over 16 years agoI hope you consider lengthening the verses in this poem, the listy structure makes the read choppy and eliminating the extranneous line breaks would smooth the imagery out. ... You have a verb/subject disagreement in line eight and maybe you could consider writing the number 38 out in words rather than numerals. Good poem.
