- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Just 1 more thing...
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Click hereI'm not going to beg, I'm not going to cry and i wont prevent it, if you want to let it die...
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoshort and sweet, but personally I think it would have looked better in 4 lines. But a nice job anyway.
FifthFlowerabout 17 years agoI liked the content of this. It is almost metrically correct. The last half should have the same stresses as the first half which had a nice anapestic meter. For example, the last part "if you want to let it die" could have been written "if you want it to die" to match the initial meter.
I like the way you did not use line breaks, actually, although most people would probably have written this as 4 lines.
