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Click hereI didn't think I'd hear your footsteps
or the door close so gently.
Was it a dream that brought
your breath to my ear?
The faint caress of my cheek
still lingers there.
I didn't hope for a night
beyond the one we shared.
Intoxicating bliss, too pure
to duplicate without reason.
Next to me, your scent
still lingers there.
I didn't hear the soft whisper
that brought a smile to my lips.
I felt the warmth of your body
as you pressed against mine.
The dream was real, your love
still lingers there.
I liked how it created images that seemed to float around my head. Are your poems the roadmap?
your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the journey
is a perfect word for this poem, so sensual and romantic. You may call yourself savage, but what you wrote here is very tender and feminine. It's cohesive, too--the "linger" line in each stanza pulls it together beautifully. A great read! :)
This poem is a lovely read, Really good, I love how I drifted a I read it.