- Erotic Poetry
- Just A Lil Taste
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Click hereSweet nectar dripping
Honey flowing thru
Carmel softly smooth
Sweetness upon my lips
My tongue slowly sneaks out
Just one lil taste
Lightly licks
Chocolate oozing
Cream so light
Sinfully sensual
Upon my tongue now
Silky and smooth
Bursting with delight
Swirling it around
Tasting
Juicy jam
Sweet as sin
Tongue begs for more
Greedily tasting
Long licks
Slamming my senses
Over taking my wet mouth
Consuming all I can
Butterscotch drips
Sliding throughout
Shooting me full
Strawberry gel
Seedy and sweet
Sucking so slow
Dripping
Oozing
Wetness galore
Coconut milk
Sugary Syrup
Upon my lips
Tasting more~
- COMMENTS
seannelsonabout 19 years agoFirst of all, I appreciate your enthusiastic comment on "Copped Diem," which would be "Carped Diem" if I were any good at titles.
This one's tough to critique. It has its flaws: it's a little hard to know if you're talking about licking pussy or giving a blow job, though I'm pretty sure you meant the latter. And some of the tastery was a little weak: "sinfully sweet" is SO hallmark.
But I really liked the central vision of the poem. You really got deep into the taste thing and did some real poetical work there; I mean, you get the reader to engage with their life force. Overall, I think it's an excellent poem.
keyen31over 19 years agoseems to send the senses in different directions. misleading? or not? sticky, tricky, that's how it is. it's all in the way you consume it. this really is great!
Christina O. Leighover 19 years agoExcuse me- I must leave NOW!!
I'm going to through all the tasty goodies in the house all over my sweetheart...and have some hot lickity SPLIT SEX!!
