just food

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dandelion leaves
torn, ripped, creamy un-dressing
balsamic vinegar dash
broiled

dancing shrimp
sautéed intimate snug bacon
thick sliced, lime
w/seeds for spitting at lover

smiling peaches
fuzz outer spread stuffed
tuna chunk, olive skinned
oiled slick

wobble
stir, vibrate, mince,
boot to the corner of an empty brown room
4 doors down, shades drawn,
stand up proud, legion of one
on-top of this flimsy covered pit w/caution

shaky support
rotting plys
creaky leaky
small control
well fed

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YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
just food?

I'm with you through "mince".

Then I lose theme and interest.

Some good images and phrases.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Just tasty...

poetry. A wonderful recipe and poem. Well done.

jim : )

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
almost

sounds like a dinner menu from a dumpster. how about adding some words that actually bind the thoughts together, instead of the disjointed musings of a taste tester with no buds

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