Just Rolling Through

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lindiana
lindiana
157 Followers

It was almost
More than she
Could bare knowing
He was never
Going to be
The man she
Dreamt of all
Those nights alone

She had never
Asked for someone
Perfect or well
Built or smart
Or even educated
Just breathing and
Also with a
Pulse

He fit the
Bill down to
The tightness of
His t-shirt stretched
Over his hairy
Chest which was
More bear like
Than bare like

And still she
Learned to love
Him warts and
All and yes
There were warts
On his toes

Life throws you
Curve balls if
You don't place
Your order ala
Carte and specify
Exactly what type
Of Side dishes
You want with
Your main dish

But sometimes ordering
Off the menu
Can turn out
To be the
Most adventurous thing
You could ever
Do without leaving
Your own comfortable
Life behind like
Dust under your
Tires that spin
Since you never
Bother to brake
As you roll
Through your life


lindiana
lindiana
157 Followers
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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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The lines are far too short, giving this good poem a choppy read. And I would rethink ending lines with words like: and, a, be, to, of, the, etc. This poem is mentioned on the review thread.