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Click hereLife’s greatest blessing arrived
packaged in pink ribbons and lace
thrown on the floor, five foot four
of answered prayers, eyes aglow
with suppressed desire, flames fanned by breath
hot with sexual desire, lips devouring
minutes, hours twisted with tremors
as bodies connect in wild abandonment
swept by surging urges of animal want
spreading, diving, desperately tight
body knot unraveling, sweaty limbs akimbo
submerging, colliding, flames licking flesh
temptation tickled and indulged
spiraling, screaming, abandoned control
crashing in spontaneous combustion
kamikaze death midst erotic inferno
*written by lildarlin and tungtied2u for the Grab a Partner challenge
Your Poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Review"
for Saturday Dec 11 2004
thanks for the read~
I thought I recognised some of LilDarlin's words and ideas here.
Well done, both of you.
up in flames
really good work
liked this
"swept by surging urges of animal want"
dive right in attitude
I've been a (reasonably) good boy this year. Can I have me one of those? :D