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bluerains
bluerains
15 Followers

The watchman waits
by gates of Orion
to lift her Venus veil.
Dragon and Lamb
spread another silver
lining over her rainbow.

She embeds her song
in orbital bliss
uncovering, rediscovering,
herself
as inner lovers tickling time
in splendorous attraction
infusing inhalation,
tuning to her perfect pitch
opposing obscurity.

bluerains
bluerains
15 Followers
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ishtatishtatover 17 years ago
Tense?

I like it, especially the first part.The second is perhaps weakened by too many 'ing verbs, 6 I think. Splendorous? - not sure whether that word works but that's probably me.

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
:)

I particularly enjoyed the first grouping. Some lovely imagery there, blue :)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
mystical

an excellent mystical poem (~_~) a very nice write blue!

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