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Click hereround face shining
all through the night
waking with
the morning light
ticks not from
habituation
pendulum dancing
in unison
quartz hand movement
around and around
chiming each hour with
a beautiful sound
seconds abound
and minutes fly by
regulating life
while keeping time
lunch..time for a break..time to catch the bus..time, time, time. How would we live in todays world without, time...and our quartz watches. Well done.
the most precious gift of all. Clearly, that was realized this holiday, else you would not have written such a beautiful piece in which the reader can HEAR the clock. I do hope that you shared time that was needed, where it was needed.
the literary journey through a read in its time (~_~) ...wonderful
A lovely rendering richly describing the appearance and actions of a clock. Clean vivid images. Well Crafted.
Simple and clean,
An easy read;
A subjective call here,
I would change one line to, "round and round;"
Seems to flow off the tongue better.