Kill yourself, my dear

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Kill yourself, my dear.
Let me know you’re hurting.
Let me know you still care.
That this eats you up inside.

Or else, kill me, my dear.
Attack me for leaving.
Punch me, kick me, stab me.
Let me know you feel.

Do it for me, my dear.
As I run from the sight
Of his dick in your ass
Of your face in delight.

Please hate me, my dear.
Respond to me, my dear.
Let me know that you still care
That this was a little stray.

Help me to feel, my dear.
Beg to take me back
Cry in your room
Leave pleading messages.

For right now, my dear.
I can not feel, my dear.
I can only see the wave of lust
That look in your eyes
And feel replaced.

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angelicminxangelicminxabout 19 years ago
Many times...

I have felt the same way. Fantastic work. ~Minx

tolyktolykabout 19 years ago
Literally breath taking

The depth of emotion you display within this piece is awe-inspiring. Simply amazing!

StaffWriterStaffWriterabout 19 years ago
Well Done

Well done, LC, well done. Not too melodramatic, but with a lilt that illustrates your anger, your sense of betrayal, your sense of longing still. Well done indeed.

bg23bg23over 19 years ago
Terrifying

Thank you.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
i almost

skipped this one, just because of the title, ( someone said that to me once) but you express some powerful emotions in here and you do it very well. good job!! keep writing :)

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