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- Killing
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KILLING
By JCSTREET © 2004
Why is it at once so hard and
yet so easy to kill, men
rounding the Horn in a fret
of misery and drizzle, and
living to tell the tale, yet
a single Teflon® coated bullet
shaved slightly on one side to encourage
tumbling in air
whirligigs through the viscera like
a Hell-spawned enema
leaving only empty space
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- COMMENTS
twelveoonealmost 20 years agotechnical question: why would anyone take a teflon bullet and make a tumbler out of it, it seems it would defeat the purpose of teflon penetration.
Otherwise perfect, Hell-spawned enema is a great phrase, didn't you use that as a comment on one of my submissions? LOL
echoes_salmost 20 years agoright through the heart of the matter, point blank. Very poignant and sharp.
Anonymousalmost 20 years ago"rounding the Horn in a fret
of misery and drizzle,"
I love how this sounds
misery and drizzle
it will stick in my head
hope it doesn't show up in my poem in ten years
tungtied2ualmost 20 years agoAnother example of if you're going to do something, do it thoroughly. Thanks JC
Tathagataalmost 20 years ago"tumbling in air
whirligigs through the viscera like
a Hell-spawned enema
leaving only empty space"
Is brilliant.
You're a wonderful poet Sir
I'm glad to be able to read your work here.
Thank you
