what finally slapped me in the groin
was the travel of your hips
toward the bar, which I saw as if
you'd been spread on a photographic plate
and smacked with some huge charge
because your aura glowed red
as a five-alarm blaze
and not even Nina Kulagina
could have gotten a cold read off you
that night, anyway

thank god more skin than just my fingertips
got scorched

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