Kissed

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You placed a tear drop
with your words
on my finger tips

I held it there
deep in thought
in a fixed stare
unaware
that it was there
because you cared

I felt that tear drop
create another
when wet trails
found the crest
of my cheek
and tickled
while running under my chin

I took my finger
with your tear drop
and wiped mine
from my gin
that was when
our tear drops

kissed

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LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
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awesome...

totally powerful and moving Buddy!

another good job!

T

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
THE THOUGHT...

of this, sent me in chills..

so very sensual I think,

in ways only a heart can understand.

I loved it ... *kiss*.

-sGp-

jthserrajthserraover 18 years ago
that's four now...

in the first stanza, drop the s on finger tips. A singular drop on a singular fingertip and this good poem is a teardrop better. You show some wonderful restraint and a touch of subtlety here. This is the best I have seen from you since the escutcheon smile...

jim : )

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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gin or chin?

No matter; the effect is highly charged with deep emotion. Now if I could only get my muse to keep sitting in my lap I might be able to do as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
now thats just about

the sweetest potion in motion I have ever tasted...another one of your awesome love stories...now ...am confused...do you have 2 wives...[winks] blue