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Click hereYou placed a tear drop
with your words
on my finger tips
I held it there
deep in thought
in a fixed stare
unaware
that it was there
because you cared
I felt that tear drop
create another
when wet trails
found the crest
of my cheek
and tickled
while running under my chin
I took my finger
with your tear drop
and wiped mine
from my gin
that was when
our tear drops
kissed
of this, sent me in chills..
so very sensual I think,
in ways only a heart can understand.
I loved it ... *kiss*.
-sGp-
in the first stanza, drop the s on finger tips. A singular drop on a singular fingertip and this good poem is a teardrop better. You show some wonderful restraint and a touch of subtlety here. This is the best I have seen from you since the escutcheon smile...
jim : )
gin or chin?
No matter; the effect is highly charged with deep emotion. Now if I could only get my muse to keep sitting in my lap I might be able to do as well.
the sweetest potion in motion I have ever tasted...another one of your awesome love stories...now ...am confused...do you have 2 wives...[winks] blue