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Click hereThe first just a peck on the cheek
With a hand shake
Her other hand on my arm
Our bodies not touching
The next a quick brush across my lips
Her body just touching, holding both of my hands
I catch her scent, her eyes closing
Then a beautiful smile
The end of the evening at her hotel room door
A real kiss, sweet and long, an arm around my neck
My arms around her gently pulling her closer
Her other hand on my chest says not yet
Morning meet in the hotel breakfast room
Happy kiss, a clinging hug
And the flick of her tongue
Express her desire, make it a promise
Evening kiss deep and long
At her hotel room door
My mouth insistent, hers surrendering
The hand on my chest coming up around my neck
Wonderful kisses in the nape of her neck
Her beautiful breasts, the backs of her knees
Her nether lips, as she opens for me
Her beautiful mouth as I enter her
Sweet soft kisses on my eyes, my mouth
As she settles against me for our rest
Whispering words I cannot quite catch
Open loving kiss as we wake again
It's a lovely story that takes us through each moment but in the other poems of yours I've read so far I have 'felt', in this one I 'see'. Still...well done.
I sincerely appreciate your feedback. I wrote this while having a phone conversation with her about it... We were both pretty pleased with it, perhaps because we felt the build up that was going on...
....each kiss had more "show" and less "tell". You have to help your reader *feel* what the participants are feeling not just describe it. Let the reader do some of the work. Nice effort. :-)