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- Kisses from the Rain
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The stars began to sob
And the sky cried out in pain
I noticed that the world
Was ending yet again
My heart began to throb
I forgot that I was sane
And on my lips the soft taste
Of kisses from the rain
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2 Comments
LeBrozover 18 years ago~~
Welcome to Lit with this your first verse;
a very good first try,
seems a bit strained in the middle,
keep working and growing.
Anonymousover 18 years agosimple is good
Something is missing, I don't know what. I do like this
a lot. sandspike
