- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Kitty
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I saw it lurking on the edges of the bush forest,
a miniature Aslan of the backyard
with golden eyes over a Chesire smile,
paws that caress the blades and leave them greener.
I crouched warrior style
I cooed it a love song
I offered it my hand,
which it disdained after a scavenger's nuzzle.
So I watch my love over a latte
elegantly Trafalgaring mating fire-beetles.
I could seduce it with a saucer of milk
but that's how I lost my dairy farm.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 19 years agoIt's a great balance of subtle and ironic and, yes, the ending is a great tongue-in-cheek twist. Thanks for the read. :)
Reltneabout 19 years agoThis is nicely sculpted. Just tight enough to draw forth images in the mind’s eye that fade into the next as the words flow on. – Very smooth – and the ending is a delicious twist!
The only line that loses me is “Trafalgaring mating fire-beetles”. I don’t know the reference so I miss the image. :(
A very good read!
(I don't do thermometers.)
