Knees

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Knees slender
Curvaceously defined from
A lifetime's insistence
On skirts through fall and winter.
Knee-high boots and argyle socks tucked
behind me, on my vespa
we'd perch and wait for spring, the thawing
When wind like fingers would drift through your black honeycomb hair
And lift the hemline of your dress
Made scandalous, rippling weightlessly against your thighs.

Impatiently, I would take luxurious glimpses
Of your exposed knee.
And reach around to tickle
behind them with ungloved fingers
We would giggle, say hello to the lights
Of the city growing distant
And bridge like a vodka bottle
And chase lights on Tillary.
Turn, you'd say, then command.
Like magic, we'd be on yet
Again.

I never could say no.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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The wind and other hinted at sensuous delights reveal such an image of innocent {or not} life's pleasures.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
No one can say no to a woman on a Vespa!

and you call this most sensual poem non- erotic? You have it too good in life pall... enjoy the ride! And thanks for he hot poem.

AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
Just wonderful!

The images in this are so vivid. It's my favorite new poem today though I think it could benefit from a bit of shaping and editing. Just my opinion of course--it's really good writing though.

Your poem has been recommended today in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!