tagNon-Erotic PoetryKoi ni Ochitano*

Koi ni Ochitano*


Thank you
You've always been there
Thank you
You're such a friend
When I think of
What we've been through together
I'm suprised I didn't see it sooner
Before the end

I don't know
How long we've been here
I don't know
When it happened first
I didn't expect
This thing to just happen
On a summer night just dancin'
And now I fear the worst

Suddenly we fell in love*
Now we are both fallen angels
We fight and push and shove
Because we didn't tell
Just how hard we fell
For each other

*Translation note: For those of you who don't speak Japanese, the rough translation of the title is found in the line with the asterisk. Thank you.

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