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In my utopia
you belong in
a Schoenberg's song
in a medieval adventure
a B movie
about a girl.

And I'll never forgive you
the drawn death on the wooden floor.
You shouldn't have died like that
without at least some music
a volatile scream
in the echo of a guitar.

Dumb dumb dumb.
I'll never forgive you
but I'm not that angry any more.

Happiness is a very cold gun.
Come as you are. Stay awhile.

 

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Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 17 years ago
^

I like your utopia.

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
beautiful

such a bittersweet tribute to a musician I admire so much.

ps, congrats on the E

:)

maria

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
resigned.

Resigned to the Inevitable ~ acceptance.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
Confronting death

As a reaction to a personal loss or to loosing a spiritual/

Inspirational person or a group of people, we find that a protective image we had which surrounded both ourselves and the person who died hade been shattered. We build that screen, mostly unknowingly, and it protects us from the face of death itself, as naked of meaning hopes and with no personal story attached to it.

Some who face loss can be outraged by the fact that the person they lost was stripped from the protective image they created and in doing so have robbed them from the same.

Coming back to accept memories as such is forgiving the dead for leaving us, and holding on to what they left with us.

What a eulogy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
....

back in 94

grunge was king and

they were god

the breakthrough

happened like a bolt

of lightning

and struck him down like

a lone tree.

flannels and

rainy weather

the bridge in

aberdeen, i sat under

one year later

smoking weed as a

tribute to nirvana.

curt

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