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Click hereTwo men cast fishing lines
into the grey glass of an early spring lake
from a dock upended,
forced skyward
by winter's forgotten ice
The lake heaves toward them
in steady ripples,
silver and blue
and their fishing lines pluck at water's skin
in places here and there
The men's shoulders round,
heads bent low against grey sky –
they cast and spin
cast and spin
from the ragged dock
And the cliffs across the lake loom
a pale bite out of dark spruce.
I collected pebbles at the edge of this lake
one bottle green
one earth red
one dove white
They rattled in my pocket for days.
That day sun dazzled
as it crept toward the jagged crown of spruce
Someone played a honey coloured guitar
and the water was golden with sun,
and all of our faces as well.
I saw a young couple kiss from very far away;
the girl threw her yellow head back afterwards.
I cried quietly
because the moment was perfect,
and fingered the smoothness of pebbles in my pocket.
Truly beautiful work. Poetry doesn't have to be a thing of elegance and seductive imagery, but, damn, it's wonderful when it is.
When you drop by with a poem. Thanks for the read.
Crystal clear imagery beautiful descriptives