Lap Dance I

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Part 1 of the 2 part series

Updated 03/25/2022
Created 10/31/2013
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"Want you to make me feel..."
club lights flash to
"Like I'm the only girl in the world"
she starts behind his chair
places her fingers on his shoulders
and traces down
"Like I'm the only one that you'll ever love"
his arms
as she leans into his neck
a slight moan escapes
"the only one who who understands"
she sways to his side
lifts her inner leg
tip toe to crotch
her pinky toes almost brushing...
"cause I'm the only one who understands"
she traces calf
then switches
outside leg
her fingers so slowly
swirl higher and higher
on her thigh
"how to make you feel like a man"
she steps again
in front of him
she looks over her shoulder
then plants herself
on his lap
her body moves in time to the music
hypnotic
"Like I'm the only one that's in command"
she raises to her toes
and presses her bottom off the chair
moving in circles
right
above...
suddenly she's on all fours
"take me for a ride, ride"
she wiggles
her body shaking
so seductively
"let me make you rise, rise"
she lies
belly to floor
legs kick from the knees
hips rise and fall
she rolls towards him
on her side like a centerfold
traces her curves
"make it last all night, night"
she jumps up
forward fold
her bottom right in front of his nose
she stands fully
runs her fingers up her legs
"Like I'm the only one who knows your heart"
she smacks her bottom
tips her head and winks
"only girl in the world"

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alecxavieredmondalecxavieredmondover 10 years ago
Impressive!

As someone that's received his fair share of lap dances I can confidently say that this was a masterful description of a lap dance that would be worth every penny. Great wordplay and very suggestive imagery. Hell yeah, Lesse! Hell yeah!

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
excellent Juxtaposition of Rihanna's lyrics with

your description of erotic actions : as i have mentioned elsewhere for a confirmed Bottom fetishitist like me this poem is Heaven's Manna !

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Rihanna - huh.

Guess I should listen to more modern music. I go from Ella Fitzgerald to Stevie Nicks. Agree absolutely about leaving the "clothing" as well as what she looks like to the imagination. I have a vivid imagination. Mmmmmmmmm.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
IS SHE GIVING OR RECEIVING

the afore mentioned action, TK U MLJ LV NV

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthor
the song?

I didn't write that song lol... that's Rihanna's "Only Girl" but thanks for your kind comments.

If I ever gave a lap dance it'd probably be something like that.

Sometimes leaving out details like clothing leaves the readers imagination in charge.

Noticed one typo. Should be no "to" at the end of the second line.

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