Last Call

byKundalinguini©

it's such an elegant crowd
five star all the way
anyone who's anyone
tux and gown soiree
dom perignon on ice
immaculate canape
not a soul is dancing
musicians all still play

your finest single malt
leave the bottle please
having trouble standing
but not because of these
the crowd is getting rowdy
some are on their knees
ever tilting floorboards
flares above the seas

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