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Click hereMotor out from the dock, cross the little bay
Air is cold, just a few boats in the water
Leaves mostly gone, the trees show graceful branches
It’s a long, narrow lake, like a fjord
Turn into the wind, kill the sputtering outboard
The noisy old clunker wont last
Clouds and sun, hills gray-brown, water blue
The lake is beautiful, the silence is, too
Raise the main, fall off to a reach
She wakes and begins to heel gently
Set the jib, sheet home and she prances
Like a horse let out of the barn
She’s an old, old boat and small
But her brand new set of sails
Is bringing her back to her youth
She’s pretty, and lively, and fast
There is another sail out down the lake
Maybe two miles, maybe three
Maybe a race, maybe just conversation
With a kindred spirit as we pass - maybe both
My old dog settles down with a grunt
And I settle down with a smile
Close my eyes, feel the wind, feel the water
Feel the tiller, feel the life of my boat
very lovely. You do a good job capturing the moment in words, with emotion and setting.
A beautifully painted picture that draws you into a situation, a place - feelings.
And, Old Bear - nothing jars!
Stands out like a breath of fresh air. (Do breaths of fresh air stand out?)